Archaein's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Warp Kamehameha]

Well...

There is an Alphas section on Newgrounds for unfinished movies. You really should send it there instead.

[Fluffy the Fluffed Fuzz]

Pretty good...

For a first animation! But it needs more work. Keep it up!

[Party Rock Anthem 3DMM]

Well...

You really should improve the quality.

By the way, if you don't want to get annoyed with song authors, I suggest you to go to the music section of NG. You can freely use songs here to put in your movies!

[Hamlet: Madness Style]

That was funny!

Dude, don't be so rough with yourself. I like it!

The way your caracters talking looks like Skwisgaar in Metalocalypse! :)

And the poison for ears, as the same as an episode of the Simpsons!

However, you should increase your font size. I got some problem to read while watching the movie.

Keep it up! ^^

AngernessRadiation responds:

I actually had to reduce the font size cause the first size I tried went offscreen, lol. But thanks, I guess. <x'D

[Random Killing]

Nice but short!

I think you should start the song only when we play on "Play" button and not while loading the movie. Maybe find a song a little bit shorter so it can fit with the duration of your movie.

[Dreamer's Flight]

Pretty cute!

But you should add more FPS to get it smoother.

[D&W: Origins S2 25]

Good

That was a good movie. Pretty good artworks too! However, you should fix the preloader bug to be sure that we won't have to presse F5 to load it again. Maybe adding a replay button at the end instead of just restart the movie from the beginning.

I think your opening intro should be shortened a little bit. You are not making a blockbuster movie which people are going to pay to see.

The music is well chosen! Nothing to say about that!

Overall, a good work! Keep it up!

AxelTheAs responds:

Thanks ;) For the preloader I have no other solution for now ^^'

[CS: GO Trailer]

Very good!!!

I like the anti-hacker part lol. Keep up your good work! :)

[Animator vs Animation III]

It can't end like this!!!

I feel sad for the animator. Farewell dude!

Great job by the way!!! :)

[In The Dark Trailer]

Awesome!!!

This is a hell of a great idea you got there. Can't wait to see the first episode! ^^

Comick responds:

Thanks! Glad you liked it